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Song I'm working on.

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I'll be there like a morning stare,
A dove flying by and a slow bus ride.
Angels singing in the dead of night,
Feeling as good as Barry White.

You can tell me, what is on your mind.
Don't leave behind, your emotional side.

I trust you, believe me.
I tell you, you should trust me to.
I trust you, believe me.
I tell you, you should trust me to.
I'll be here.
Year and year.
O'er and O'er again.
I'll be here.

Ozzy singing, doorbell ringing,
Fireflies and sure I'm feeling.
Millionaires all got their spares,
Jolly Ranchers and worn out scares.

You can tell me, what is on your mind.
Don't leave behind, your emotional side.

I trust you, believe me.
I tell you, you should trust me to.
I trust you, believe me.
I tell you, you should trust me to.
I'll be here.
Year and year.
O'er and O'er again.
I'll be here.
I still have a few more verses or something. I'm not completely done yett. I'll hopefully be done soooon though. [:
Tell me what you think pleasee!
Thank yaaa. [;
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Kickflip182's avatar
Pretty cool so far. I like where you're going in this one, its pretty happy. :]

After you've added your other verses and stuff, are you going to write...I forgot what its called, but kind of a change in lyrical structure before the song ends? I was just wondering, since that might be an interesting idea if you intended on ending the song with the chorus.